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SPOILER !!!!! JANGAN LIAT KALAU GAK MAU TAU !!!!
Lakisha minggu ini keluar !! Jadi gak ada lagi deh kejadian Simon- Lakisha::devil:: (kalau mau tau blok tulisan di kiri tulisan ini)
hik padahal kontestan favorit ::devil:: gw tu bodynya itu lho... basgol sexy banget....
BTW gw masih kurang ngerti soal leak T_T, dummy unitnya sih udah gw atur HP regennya minus, jadi lama2 mati sendiri, apa itu mengurangi leak ?
menurut gw yg bikin leak ntu... pengecekan every 0.05 seconds ntu...Quote:
BTW gw masih kurang ngerti soal leak T_T, dummy unitnya sih udah gw atur HP regennya minus, jadi lama2 mati sendiri, apa itu mengurangi leak ?
klo triggernya banyak...bakal lag bgt tuh... >_<
Nice Spell anyway...coz gak ada wait...ntu multi-unit-instanceable spell... ^^
bukan itu yang bikin leak... itu gak ada masalah koq (gw yakin dota jg banyak bgt trigger yang kayak gitu)Quote:
menurut gw yg bikin leak ntu... pengecekan every 0.05 seconds ntu...
klo triggernya banyak...bakal lag bgt tuh... >_<
Yang ngeleak itu contohnya:
Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units in (Playable map area) matching ((((Matching unit) has buff Cocytus (Pause))
Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units within 300.00 of (Target point of ability being cast) matching ((((Matching unit) belongs to an enemy of (Owner of (Triggering unit))) Equal to True) and (((Matching unit) is alive) Equal to True))) and do (Actions)
Loop - Actions
Unit - Create 1 Locust for (Owner of caster) at (Position of caster) facing (Position of (Picked unit))
Unit - Set level of cocytus dummy for (Last created unit) to (Level of Cocytus for caster)
Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Human Mountain King - Storm Bolt (Picked unit)
dsb.
BTW, ini gak MUI, soalnya liat pas di trigger 'die', itu kan ada 'caster damage unit', klo abis hero A ngecast, trus 2 detik kemudian hero B ngecast, brarti variable 'caster'nya itu ganti orang kan? nah nanti yang bunuh unitnya bukan Hero A lagi, tapi Hero B...
Hm.... sebenernya sih kalau mau buat MUI bisa....
jadinya : caster (player number)
Tapi gw pikir ini cuma 1 player doank, jadi gw gak pake :P :P
aih...gebleg...baru nyadar gw klo ntu ada udg_caster a.k.a global variable...hahaha...iya...
dota?menurut gw sih ga...klo periodic event mending pake periodic timer menurut gw...
n mending dikasi condition yang bisa ngebuat trigger ntu off sementara waktu...misal... udg_IsCocytusActive[arrayed] yang tipe datanya boolean gitu...
ga tw napa...gara2 kebanyakan kyk gitu map gw yang dlu leak parah...lol... xP
n....yah...emank sih ntu bisa pake array caster[owner of casting unit] dimana yang targetnya enemy of caster...
tapi karena lw buat banyak trigger...gimana cara pindahin index array-nya dari satu trigger ke trigger laennya hayo?? ::devil::
gak2, klo yang periodic event, asal gak ada leak, gak bakal ngelag koq!
Bukannya tinggal di setting dikit yah? Misalnya di trigger yang pas ngeluarin skill itu, nyalain boleean berarray, misalnya > Cocytus_PlayerCasted[Cocytus_playernumber] = true. Trus di trigger2 lainnya tinggal pake for A = 1 - 12, trus if Cocytus_PlayerCasted[A] == true baru jalanin triggernyaQuote:
n....yah...emank sih ntu bisa pake array caster[owner of casting unit] dimana yang targetnya enemy of caster... tapi karena lw buat banyak trigger...gimana cara pindahin index array-nya dari satu trigger ke trigger laennya hayo??
hmm...haha...bisa sih kyk gitu... xP
ow...bisa gitu yah...baru tau...nyahahah...maklum...programmer kacangan gw...wkwkwkwk....
jarang pake banyak trigger sih :p
nah, gw lagi bingung nih, klo mo bikin MUI pake timer gimana caranya, masa' ada 12 trigger (beda2 condition timernya) yang harus dibikin... serem amat!
BTW, gw ngeremake lagi spell gw, duh2 cape. Sesiangan ini gw cman depan compie ajah, ngubah konsep spellnya >.< Nanti sore gw post dah!
Spellnya yang udah keluar itu tipe Thunder ama Ice kan? nah yang gw bikin ini tipe Fire, jadi klop dah ^^
timernya bikin pake JASS,jadi pake satu trigger aja....lol...
wew...pake di klop2in sgala....tar klo kduluan orang ngesubmit fire gimana lw?
ganti lagi? :p
Kingb00ker's Cocytus spell
Originality:
Lumayan, not the most original spell tetapi menurut gua idenya keren. Gua ngecek di hiveworkshop, yeah ada beberapa spell sih yang sama, tetapi spell2 tersebut tidak nambahin stat hero (+1 int). Nicely done!
Funtionality:
Mungkin di area sini gua harus sedikit kasar, -_-'. Menurut gua fungsi nya terlalu polos. Sama saja seperti, damage area caster. Cuma karena kamu tambahin fungsi dimana setiap kill hero dapet +1 int dan +50 hp, well functionality nya lumayan lah.
Animation:
Animation nya bagus cuma kurang rapih. Effek Death and Decay kurang nyambung sama effek Nova spell tersebut.
Balance:
Spell nya menurut gua terlalu obsesif dan imba. Sekali dipake effeknya gokil! Dah ngebunuh unit secara massive dan yang lebih heronya ditambahin stats dan hp! Kyknya perlu di nerve dikit biar lebih balanced.
Bug Free
Pass!
Score sent to kingb00ker's private inbox
Valkemiere's Earth Rush
bah yang ini menghawatirkan nih... :P gg
Originality:
No komen, hanya "100% original!" :D
Funtionality:
Rada-rada susah untuk membuat keputusan, tetapi menurut gua sih kalo di taro di map Dota (point of reference), fungsi nya lumayan ok, cuma yang kena spell perlu di limit biar gak lag. Tapi keren juga kalo lagi loncat2 musuhnya bisa diserang.
Animation:
Animasi nya keren sih, cuma lag banget trus lompat2 nya rada2 kasar, tetapi gua suka effek gedung2 nya jatuh, mogah-mogahan kalo di real game kena tower gak langsung ancur ya -_-'...
Balance:
Heheheh, NOT balanced! Kalau di kasih quota (beberapa banyak unit yang bisa kena), pasti balance, soalnya damage yang diberikan ke setiap musuh juga gak gede2 amet.
Bug Free
Fail!
Total amount of leaks: 12
Leak Rating: Bad
Score sent to kingb00ker's private inboxQuote:
(Line: 13 ) (Word: 11 ) Position Leak
Environment - Create a 0.50 second Normal ripple deformation at (Position of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) with starting radius 250.00, ending radius 1024.00, and depth 125.00, using 0.50 second ripples spaced 512.00 apart
Environment - Create a 0.50 second Normal ripple deformation at ^Leak
(Suggested fix) Set L = (Position of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) with starting radius 250.00, ending radius 1024.00, and depth 125.00, using 0.50 second ripples spaced 512.00 apart
(Suggested fix) Custom Script: Call RemoveLocation(udg_L)
(Line: 17 ) (Word: 16 ) Position Leak
Unit - Create 1 Impale Dummy for (Owner of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) at (Position of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) facing ((Real((Integer A))) x 30.00) degrees
Unit - Create 1 Impale Dummy for (Owner of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) at ^Leak
(Suggested fix) Set L = (Position of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) facing ((Real((Integer A))) x 30.00) degrees
(Suggested fix) Custom Script: Call RemoveLocation(udg_L)
(Line: 20 ) (Word: 8 ) Unit Group Leak
Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units within 700.00 of (Position of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) matching ((((Matching unit) is A structure) Not equal to True) and (((Owner of (Matching unit)) Not equal to (Owner of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))])) and (( and do (Actions)
Unit Group - Pick every unit in ^Leak
(Suggested fix) Custom Script: bj_wantDestroyGroup = true
(Suggested fix) Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units within 700.00 of (Position of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) matching ((((Matching unit) is A structure) Not equal to True) and (((Owner of (Matching unit)) Not equal to (Owner of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))])) and (( and do (Actions)
(Line: 20 ) (Word: 12 ) Position Leak
Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units within 700.00 of (Position of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) matching ((((Matching unit) is A structure) Not equal to True) and (((Owner of (Matching unit)) Not equal to (Owner of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))])) and (( and do (Actions)
Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units within 700.00 of ^Leak
(Suggested fix) Set L = (Position of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) matching ((((Matching unit) is A structure) Not equal to True) and (((Owner of (Matching unit))
(Suggested fix) Custom Script: Call RemoveLocation(udg_L)
(Line: 25 ) (Word: 9 ) Position Leak
Destructible - Pick every destructible within 700.00 of (Position of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) and do (Actions)
Destructible - Pick every destructible within 700.00 of ^Leak
(Suggested fix) Set L = (Position of Caster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]) and do (Actions)
(Suggested fix) Custom Script: Call RemoveLocation(udg_L)
Location variable has not been removed: player))]
Sial, internet gw gak isa buka situs luar, gak isa liat dan comment Earth Rush de... (yey! skrg elemennya tambah lengkap! Thunder, Ice, Earth, Fire!)
ini pass dan fail berbdasarkan apa yah? leak kah? klo gitu kenapa yang punya punya kingbooker pass? secara gw cek di Leak Check di total2 Leaknya ada 11 biji (3 + 4 + 2 + 2)...Quote:
Bug Free
Fail!
Total amount of leaks: 12
Leak Rating: Bad
BTW, klo ngecek leak, manual plz. Soalnya klo pake Leak Check suka gak akurat... Misalnya waktu itu gw taro special effect di variable ber array, trus gw ancurinnya belakangan, masa' diitung leak ama dia >.<
Masa sih? Wah gua coba cek lg, td gua pake leak check result nya 0, kalo manual lama dan malah lebih gak akurat :D
weks, manual tuh lebih akurat kali >.< Yah, minimal punya gw manual yah, soalnya klo dimasukin ke Leak Check dibilang nge-leak, padahal nggak ^^Quote:
Masa sih? Wah gua coba cek lg, td gua pake leak check result nya 0, kalo manual lama dan malah lebih gak akurat
OK, i've entered my submission now!!
Sekarang gw pegnen comment ttg Earth Rush:
Originality
Original I must say, terutama bagian unit yang terpental2.
Concept
Idenya sich bagus, sayang konsepnya gak sekreatif idenya. Misalnya, kenapa gak skill ini dibikin channeling? bayangin ajah, klo dia lagi ajeb2 selama 5 detik, tapi dia sendiri gak isa gerak, kan gak lucu klo lagi kestun masih bisa mukul2 tanah.
Cosmetic
Cool, love it!
Balance
May I say freaking imba? Skill disable area 5 detik dengan damage 500... klo di dota jurusnya enigma ato Rooftrellen ajah gak segede itu damagenya...
Coding
Again LEAAAKKKK!!!
Trus, gw pengen nanya darimana loe dapet angka 'mukul tanah setiap 0.5 detik'? Di coding gak ada tulisan yang ngatur itu, dan ktika waktunya gw ukur pake stopwatch, ada sekitar 7 detik dari dia mulai ngecast spell....
trus ada jg line2 yang useless misalnya
pas mo ngedamage unit, ada di pick every unit, matching condition. nah, ada 3 matching condition, diantaranya, ((owner of picked unit) is not (owner of caster)) sama ((owner of picked unit) is enemy of (owner of caster)). Buat apa condition yang pertama? secara klo musuhnya caster itu gka mungkin kan dirinya sendiri???
Oh, ya penasaran nih, ini buat apa yah?
Region - Center Region 000 <gen> on PointCaster[(Player number of (Triggering player))]
itu dia ngancurin doodad kali... bukan nyerang tower...Quote:
Animation:
Animasi nya keren sih, cuma lag banget trus lompat2 nya rada2 kasar, tetapi gua suka effek gedung2 nya jatuh, mogah-mogahan kalo di real game kena tower gak langsung ancur ya -_-'...
BTW, nanya donk, disini coding gak dinilai yah? Misalnya efisiensi dari coding yang dipake, pilihan jenis trigger, cara, dsb. Klo emank gak dinilai, boleh tau napa? mengingat Triggered Spell itu sendiri terdiri dari Concept & Coding ...