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    Quote Originally Posted by Section View Post
    hadoh mak... menjelang UAS jadi ga kepikiran buat bikin cerita... huaa.... yang dikepala cuman kalkulus II sama probabilitas... bantu gw dongs.... pokoknya yang penting C dah... kalo ampe bisa di atas C, gw sumbit 5 cerita disini! (Note that!)
    mod di printscreen nih post yang satu ini, 5 cerita numpuk ya

    wah, harus dikasih layanan ++ tuh dosennya biar dapet diatas C

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    kita pegang omongannya si Section

    SAMPE GAK 5 CERITA...gw inprak WKAOKWOAKWOAK ga lah canda gw

    gw juga masih banyak stok ide cerita, tapi krn udah janji gak akan nulis cerita baru sebelum ada yg laen ngepost, jadi dipending dulu =3


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    nyahahah... monggo dicatet... karena kalo ampe di atas C (B dan A), selametan dah!
    jiahahah....

    tenang aja... 5 cerita sudah dipersiapkan... tinggal tunggu tanggal tayang.. cuman yang gw lagi mikir enaknya ni cerita gayanya apa yak???

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    Quote Originally Posted by Section View Post
    nyahahah... monggo dicatet... karena kalo ampe di atas C (B dan A), selametan dah!
    jiahahah....

    tenang aja... 5 cerita sudah dipersiapkan... tinggal tunggu tanggal tayang.. cuman yang gw lagi mikir enaknya ni cerita gayanya apa yak???

    mana nih om kok blm muncul2 5 ceritanya

    hayo... tagih tuh mod..

    kalo gw ntar ya mod, minggu2 ini lagi sibuk proyek nh ditunggu yah

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    lah wong belum keluar nilai UASNya... T_T

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    hadooh... boro-boro dapet B... Kalkulus gw dapet D! Teori Probabilitas juga dapet D... mampos mampos... (T__T)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Section View Post
    hadooh... boro-boro dapet B... Kalkulus gw dapet D! Teori Probabilitas juga dapet D... mampos mampos... (T__T)
    makan-makan....
    trololololololololo..............................

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    hiyaaa.... dapet D makan-makan... hiyaatt! :dijotos:

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    oi mana cerita...gw tahan" diri nih nungguin elu nulis...


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    huaaa... lu tega lu gw habis kena musibah lu goda gado pake cerita.. huaa...

    (tapi tenang... cerita udah dikantong... mungkin ceritanya lebih dekat ke realita...)

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    maap-maap... setelah install ulang dan repack "the lost hdd" akhirnya menemukan arsip yang dibutuhkan!

    http://www.mediafire.com/?2i3rsrh9ra7a4k1
    semuanya ada di dokumen ini... bisa didownload... tapi gw post bertahap ya...

    April
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    Music by Glasslake

    Pada suatu hari hiduplah seorang gadis cantik bernama April. Ia tinggal di Eloga's Green, Westwood. Di Eloga's Green terdapat hutan yang sangat ramah. Cahaya matahari dapat menembus sela-sela rimbunnya pohon-pohon tinggi. Segala rupa hewan-hewan lucu pun ada seperti kelinci hingga rusa. April hidup seorang diri karena sewaktu ia tinggal di kota Macht, Westwood, rumahnya terbakar akibat kerusuhan massa. Ibu dan ayahnya meninggal terbakar dan yang selamat hanyalah April sendiri karena pada waktu itu ia sedang bermain di taman. April belum bisa melupakan kejadian pahit tersebut meskipun ia selalu terlihat ceria.

    Pada suatu pagi, April hendak keluar rumah untuk mencari makanan berupa buah dan sayuran. Ia tidak mau memburu hewan karena baginya hewan disana sudah seperti temannya sendiri, berhubung tak ada yang tinggal di Eloga's Green. Sewaktu ia memetik apel di pohon, ia melihat ada seorang pemuda pingsan di padang rumput. April pun kaget dan dengan gesit ia merawat pemuda tersebut. Setelah beberapa menit, pemuda tersebut siuman.

    "Apakah kamu tidak apa-apa?" kata April.

    "Mmm... Tidak apa-apa... Apakah kamu yang menolongku?" tanya sang pemuda.

    "Ya, aku menemukanmu pingsan disini." jawab April.

    "Oh, terima kasih. Oh ya... Nama kamu siapa?"

    "Aprilion Sunlight, panggil saja aku April."

    "Namaku Rafael Winslou, panggil saja aku Ralph. Salam kenal."

    "Salam kenal juga. Mari ke rumahku. Biar kurawat kamu disana." ajak April.

    "Ya." jawab Ralph pelan.

    Akhirnya April pulang ke rumah bersama Ralph. Di rumah April, Ralph dirawat lebih intensif karena ternyata ada beberapa luka yang cukup serius. April menanyakan mengapa Ralph bisa terluka. Ralph menjelaskan bahwa rumahnya, di Macht terjadi kerusuhan yang cukup besar. Ralph berusaha untuk kabur dengan kuda setelah diserang massa, tapi akhirnya ia tidak kuat lagi dan terjatuh di padang rumput dan kudanya melarikan diri. Ketika Ralph mengucapkan "Macht", April mendadak murung.

    "Ada apa April? Ada yang salah dengan ceritaku?" tanya Ralph dengan perasaan was-was. Ia tak mau gadis yang telah menolongnya dibuat terluka olehnya.

    "Tidak... Aku hanya teringat pada masa lalu... Dulu aku tinggal disana dan ayah ibuku terbunuh akibat kerusuhan massa..." April menghentikan ceritanya karena air matanya sudah mulai tumpah.

    "Sudahlah... tak perlu diteruskan..." kata Ralph menenangkan.

    "OK... Sekarang kamu tinggallah disini untuk beberapa hari supaya lukamu cepat sembuh." April mengembalikan kecerianya.

    Hari demi hari Ralph dirawat oleh April dan lukanya kian sembuh. Ternyata selama April merawat Ralph, tak terasa ada rasa suka diantara mereka. Mereka berdua sering berjalan-jalan di sebelah utara Eloga's Green, yaitu Sun Hills dimana tempat terbaik untuk melihat matahari terbit dan terbenam. Selain itu mereka juga suka berkebun bersama di hutan. April pun benar-benar menjadi gadis yang bahagia dan perlahan kenangan pahit Macht mulai luntur.

    Akhirnya luka pada Ralph sudah sembuh benar. Sudah waktunya Ralph kembali ke kota Macht, rumahnya. April sedih kembali mendengar hal itu. Kali ini ia bukan sedih karena kata-kata "Macht" yang menghantuinya selama ini, tetapi ia sedih harus kehilangan Ralph.

    "Aku harus pergi, April. Di kota banyak yang membutuhkanku untuk membereskan kerusuhan ini." kata Ralph berat.

    "Tapi aku tidak mau kehilangan kamu... Kamu sudah menemaniku lebih dari apapun... Aku... aku... cinta ... padamu..." jawab April pelan. Matanya berkaca-kaca.

    "Sebenarnya... aku juga... cinta padamu... Kau gadis yang cantik dan baik hati. Rasanya hancur duniaku kehilangan dirimu... Tapi aku harus pergi..." aku Ralph dengan suara yang sedikit patah-patah.

    "Aku tidak mau kehilangan kamu..." isak April. Air matanya sudah tumpah.

    "Aku tidak akan mati... Dan aku janji setelah urusan ini selesai, aku akan bertemu denganmu..." kata Ralph.

    "...." April tidak berkata apa-apa.

    "Hmm... Begini saja agar kita mudah untuk bertemu. Bagaimana minggu depan kita bertemu di Glasslake? Disana merupakan tempat yang indah!" Ralph berusaha untuk menghibur.

    "Baiklah... Tapi berjanjilah untuk datang kesana. Aku akan menunggu." jawab April berat.

    "Tenanglah... Janjiku padamu dapat kupegang seperti kau memegang cintaku." kata Ralph tegas.

    April yang mendengar kata-kata itu cukup terhibur hatinya dan dapat merelakan Ralph untuk pergi. Akhirnya Ralph pergi berjalan kaki karena kudanya sudah tidak ada. April melihat Ralph dari kejauhan dengan terisak-isak, meski hatinya sangat bahagia, bercampur sangat sedih.

    Akhirnya Ralph berhasil sampai di kotanya, Macht. Ia melihat situasi di kotanya yang seperti kuburan terbuka.

    "Apa ini? Sudah seperti inikah parahnya kerusuhan tersebut?" kata Ralph kaget.

    Tiba-tiba datang seorang opsir berkuda menuju Ralph.

    "Ternyata kamu disini. Darimana saja kamu? Kerusuhan sudah kian memuncak akibat ulah provokator. Massa seperti sudah kesurupan dan membunuh siapa saja yang kontra terhadap mereka." jelas opsir.

    "Apa!!?? Aku tidak bisa membiarkan kota ini hancur oleh massa. Mari kita bersihkan mereka!" teriak Ralph.

    Akhirnya Ralph bergabung dengan pemerintah untuk membersihkan kekacauan massa. Perang besar pun terjadi. Benturan gada dan gesekan pedang menghiasi peperangan tersebut. Ralph yang merupakan orang nasionalis paling semangat membantu pemerintah. Satu dua massa tumbang olehnya. Kegigihan Ralph membangkitkan semangat para opsir dan aliansi pemerintah lainnya.

    Tiba-tiba...

    "DORRR!!"

    Ralph pun tumbang. Ia terkena tembakan di dada sebelah kanan oleh seorang oknum polisi yang berada di atas rumah. Opsir berkuda pun berteriak,

    "Tangkap oknum tersebut hidup atau mati! Aku ingin meludahi wajahnya yang tidak tahu diri itu."

    Akhirnya pasukan aliansi pemerintah maju bagaikan ombak dan kerusuhan massa pun benar-benar bersih. Oknum polisi tersebut pun berhasil ditangkap hidup-hidup dan opsir berkuda benar-benar meludahi wajah oknum tersebut. Setelah itu opsir berkuda tersebut berjalan menuju Ralph yang telah tewas tertembak. Opsir pun berkata, "Tanpa dia, kota Macht ini akan rata seperti otak si oknum tersebut." Akhirnya Ralph dimakamkan secara terhormat di wilayah Endize, Westwood.

    Setelah seminggu berlalu, April pun dengan riangnya mempersiapkan diri untuk berangkat ke Glasslake. Ia menggunakan parfum alami yang ia racik sendiri dimana harumnya tak hanya menggoda tapi menenangkan hati. Pakaiannya pun ia jahit sendiri dengan paduan warna kuning dan sedikit hijau, seperti bunga dengan tangkainya. Ia juga menggunakan bando yang terbuat dari kayu Mahogany serta dihiasi oleh bunga. Lalu April pun berangkat menuju Glasslake.

    Namun, setelah ia sampai disana, tak ada Ralph ataupun kuda. Tak ada manusia kecuali dia, April sendiri. Bandonya jatuh tanpa sebab ke tanah. Angin pun berhembus menyibakkan rambut April yang panjang. Mata April pun berkaca-kaca tapi tidak menitikkan air mata. Di danau yang sangat indah itu, dan padang bunga kuning yang mempesona, April terdiam di tengah mereka tanpa melakukan apa-apa. April menunggu Ralph yang telah tiada. Meski hari demi hari telah berlalu hingga yakinlah bahwa Ralph tak mungkin datang, Aprilion Sunlight tetap menunggu... menunggu... dan menunggu dengan hampa di tengah padang bunga kuning yang indah...

    ====================================THE END=====================================
    Story originally by D'SecTioN
    Semua cerita di atas adalah fiksi belaka. Mohon maaf bila ada kesamaan nama dan tempat karena itu bukan merupakan kesengajaan.

    Mau dikomentari tentang cerita ini? Silahkan... (Recommended!!!)

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    The Awakening
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    Belum ada cerita baru (ada sih... cuman mau dirapihin dulu... takutnya malah jadi asal ngejeplak)...

    Sedikit melakukan "Foreign Bonus" buat cerita Phase 1 yang dulu gw pernah bikin... kalo ada yang ngerasa lebih dapet feel nya dari bahasa lain :3

    Silahkan... (maap kalo ada salah grammar)

    Phase 1 - English

    Since long years ago, experiments are the most common activity, which take place in underground, or hidden places. Various theories, somewhat got advanced by the time. Unfortunately, this Technology couldn't grow as fast as the time, therefore, there are so many "unproven" expectations in current time.

    There was a man, familiarly named as Aquila (which the real name is Jonattan Grizzly), was the one of most people who tried to do experiments in underground. Subject was known well adept in Biochemist manipulation. He, once foresaw a great explosion which would happen in Chernobyl, 1986, while it was 1984, when he tried to explore physics law as his "mother" knowledge. He presumed there were something wrong related to unstable environment in a very close distance of Nuclear Reactor. His assumption was based from his own postulate, "If atom moves, makes it far from its core point, so that 'Core Point' has no any force or link anymore from that atom, then Anomaly will occur."

    Entering 1988, which there was an "invisible" war between the superpowers (which everybody sure knows them). Fantastically, in this era, people looked enthusiastic for Technology and Modernized. Military, tools and even social got improved significantly. People started to think advanced and more creative, which made them printed much spectacular solution and problem solving.

    And of course, Aquila got affected with that, but in other means. Aquila considered that great evolution, which people said "era of human-friendly", as an inhuman act and made them worse.

    "Humans, member of Animalia kingdom, beings, why they always try to play god? flawless and complex? I'm sure they won't be capable to handle their own problem and even will generate another problem!" he thought.

    And unexpectedly, with that extreme opinion, pushing Aquila to did something named "rebalanced" or it could be called "Phase" Project. In this project, based on his postulate and using nuclear reaction from Uranium, Fransium and Hydrogen in solid state, and also was designed with high complexity so it could project Gamma Ray, then a terrorizing machine had been built!

    "With this machine, I will change people perception about how to be a man! What the being must be! Um.. more accurately, WHAT's THE REAL LIFE!"

    Aquila, in fact, created that machine to do a transformation, fused two kind of materials into a new entity. His purpose was removed all the variation that human made and back to basics. He thought back to basics and be simple was a best way to avoid playing god and avoid further problem. So that's why he named that project, "Phase".

    Insanely, his first test subject was himself, without testing to other objects. He tried to fuse himself with a being from Animalia kingdom, Snake. He thought that by combining human with different being will degenerate and eliminate human advanced sides (especially the way of thinking) because different being in different divisio may cause DNA extension and some type in DNA, which has no relation to basic will be trimmed.

    Then Transformation was started, Phase Project Event #1. Subject was already in the fusion machine, then Machine AI soon analyzed components of both subjects that have same model so it could be trimmed and transform could be done.

    Machine was started! Computer started to make calculation.
    Aquila, the 30 years old man slightly appeared smiled, smiled evilly.
    Radioactive materials and Hydrogen was started to be proceeded and created a laser form.
    Those lasers started to be projected towards subjects.

    Transformation was begun!
    Machine was operated above normal!
    Estimated Succession Rate : 49%
    Matter fusion reaction was done successfully.
    Cell Transplantation was done.
    Transformation went to Phase two.
    Used Phase Theory and Algorithm.
    Anomaly Reaction was launched.
    Transplantation was completely done.
    Reforming Subject was started.
    Went to final Phase.
    Reconditioning Subject with environment parameters.
    Machine was cooling down to normal state.
    Phase Project was successfully done with 100978/101020 succession event.

    He did it! He was successfully did his own transformation! But What was happening?

    His shape was physically changed. A mirror reflected his form and he was shocked. There were so many "horns" sprouted out from his back, shoulders and heads. His legs were vanished, changed into a strong big tail, just like Serpent. His skin was not made by snake's scales, but it was transformed into somewhat like hard shell so it much more like an armor. Additionally, in fact the snake's benefit got inherited to him so he could "read" objects nearby from Earth's vibration. Surprisingly, his hands could be used normally, just like his eyes, ears and nose. That looked amazing, but it was actually failed.

    "Oh god, I failed. I miscalculated about DNA Dominance... I think I just got assimilated with that snake... I failed... I failed... What must I do now? Scares people with my failed form... ummm.. scares people with my new form... make them fear with my strength... I feel stronger... I feel extraordinary... I am greater than poor humans! I am better than them! I am the ruler! I am the truly one! I AM... better... than... god... Bwhahahahah!!!...."

    Seemed, his way of thinking also assimilated with snake's basic behaviour, caused him to lean in dominance way... He just got hunger with strength and power. His nature way of human thinking got faded away and his ambition was moved from World unity to dominate world.

    That craze got advanced into a something dangerous, when Aquila got addicted to "transform". He, with hunger of powers wanted to do transformation towards all kind of beings so he could be the "GOD" of all.

    Then, Phase Project #2 was started.

    Phase Project #3 was started.

    Phase Project #15 was started.

    Phase Project #46 was started.

    ...
    and more transformation that he did, more his human behaviours went gone and keep him to be more beast, wild, and freak.

    and more...
    more..

    That is the human which doesn't like difference, can't appreciate of variation over the world and can't think what is the true meaning of difference, just thinking in a basic and simple way. And often think will hook the ego trait up, so that just causing a feeling of always unsatisfied and want some more with unreasonable arguments.

    And that's Phase.

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    Ntar gw baca skalian taro dpn, ini lg ga pke komp ga enak >__<


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    Eh eh eh.. ternyata masi mantau juga toh... :3

    Kemaren lagi suntuk, langsung kecetus napa ga reawaken lagi bikin cerita o2jam...

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    masih lah, gw gak kayak sebagian user yang kerjanya buang thread demi nambang postingan + point kaleeeee

    dah gw taro depan tuh


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