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    wkwkkwkw campur aj om aduk trssss

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    ayo kk update lagi kapan update na ?? ketumpuk terus nih

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    hahaha culun amat
    wkwkwkwk, gw suka campurannya
    nih gw tambahin karakternya
    garra raigor ato crixalis garra?
    kakashi gondar??
    yurnero lee?
    hahaha, culun2, tambahin dari doraemon skalian!!!
    razzil suneo(kan kaya!)
    tiny jaian(gede)

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    Azwraith:wow..rame bgt ni
    Silencer:ya iya lah..masa iya dong..duren ja dibelah,masa dibedong
    Beastmasteri liat tuh banyak cew2
    Azwraith:wow..iy coy
    Silencer:da mau mulai tuh..

    Comentator prtandgnemirsa2,pertandingan da mau dimulai coy..para pemain sdang memasuki lpangan..
    Dari tim shohoku:
    -takenori "gorila" akagi
    -kaede rukawa
    -hanamichi sakuragi
    -kacamata
    -si kulit coklat
    Dari tim ryonan:
    -aang
    -kyoshi
    -raja api sozin
    -doraemon
    -spongebob

    Comentatoremirsa2..inilah line up terbaru dr tim ryonan..
    Aku ingin si spongebob,aku ingin si kyoshi.ingn ini ingn itu bnyk sekali..semua2 dpt di bakar..dpt dbkr dgn jurus si sozin..aku ingin trbg bbs dgn jrs aang..[soundtrack doraemn yg diubah]

    Hanamichi:buset..ngeri met lawan kt..sampe ad doraemn,2 avatar,raja api ampe ad si master kraby patty..oi gori..gmana neh..lwn kt bs terbg n bs masak neh...
    Akagi:dont worry boy..gw kan king kong
    Hanamichitumben ni ank ngaku2 king kong)thats right boy..
    Rukawa:dasar bodoh..

    Silencer:liat tuh tim ryonan..keren bgt pemain2 nya,..
    Beast&azwrth:benr jg..

    Cmnttremirsa..prtandingan akan dmulai..mri kt saksikan..

    Jump ball..akagi vs aang

    Akagi:buset..lawan gw avatar neh..
    Aanggw terbangin tu bola ke ring loe)

    Priitttt..

    To be continued

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    wkwkwkwkwkwk

    ah gila semua anime ada ne
    PenyesaLan Tidak Akan Datang . . . Saat Kita Belum Melakukan KesaLahan


    The more I Help Other to Succeed,
    The more I Succeed


    I'll give you all that you need
    Anything that you want I will give it to you
    I will give you the best of my life

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    Truz kelanjutan na rj api na ngebakar lap.basketna...

    Wkwkwk...

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    Chapter 4:

    Priiittt......
    Bola pun dilemparkan..

    Aangjurus pengendl tnh)buss..mampuz lu akagi..your ball is mine

    Cmntator: wow..aang menggnkn jrs tanah..akagi pun digantung pemirsa2..luar biasa..

    Akagi:sialan lu aang..turunin gw..groar(sambil menepuk dada seperti gorila)

    Hanamichi:wowow..ad topeng ****** coy..sarimin maen basket..
    Rukawa:dasar bodoh..itu gorila

    Aang:yuk all..combination skill..
    Doraemon:teng neng neng neng...pintu kemana saja..
    Spongebob:hey shohoku,this krabby patty for you..

    Tim Shohokungiler liat krabby patty)

    Aang&kyoshi:jurus pengendl udra..ciaat..terbang..
    Sozin:jurus api..katon goukakyu no jutsu..

    Shohoku: OMG..IMBA..

    Ryonan pun mengeluarkan jrs andalan ny..tiba2..

    Silencer: GLOBAL SILENCE!!
    Beastmaster:Kapak 212 & AUOOO
    Azwraith: doplewalk menylmtkn tim shohoku..

    Tim ryonan: Woi..apaan2 klian..kok ada tanda seru dikpla kami??

    Silencer: tu jurus gw coy..

    Ktika silencer sdg berbicra,azwraith melhat ad orang yg menjual sesuatu..

    Azwraith: oi yg jualan,sini lu..
    Penjual:whats up man?

    Azwraith: minta 3 portal

    Penjual: ehmmm...Brani bayar brapa loe??

    Azwraith: (gwt..gw gk bw duit..nyuri akh..)ciatt..doplewalk n mencri 3 portal..

    Penjual:kyaaa..ad hantu,portalny bs jalan2,.hantu

    Azwraith:woi kawan2,gw nyuri 3 portal neh..kabur yok

    Silencer:gile lu..
    Beastmaster:ampun2,gwt bgt lu

    Azwraith:gk sa bnyk bcot d..yuk cabut..ikuti gw..

    Portal pun dbuka azwraith n di ikuti silencer & beastmaster..(azwraith ny buta arah lho..)

    Cling..mrka pun tba di tjuan..

    Mrka tiba di tempat yg terdapat robot2 keren..

    Azwraith: wow..keren..mirip met ni robot sama yg gw liat di kidz station...klo gk slh,ni Gundam Wing,gundam heavy arms,gundam deathscythe,sandrock gundam,shenlong gundam..wah..keren..

    Silenceri azwraith..tumben otak u jalan
    Beastmaster:iy neh..ada angin ap ne?
    Azwraith: diem klian!

    To be continued..

    Tebak jlan crita ny y bro

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    wkkwkw pasti tar nyambung na k anime gundam dah

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    Chapter V


    Crita sebelumnya : azwraith cs tiba di suatu tempat yg terdapat robot2 keren,yaitu Gundam..

    Azwraith: wow..keren..(sambil bengong dan ngiler liatin gundam wing)


    Beastmaster: behh..woi.najis lu..jorok bgt lu jd hero..liat tuh ngler lu..da kayak 1kg bird nest soup..


    Silencer: what!!..did you say bird nest just now??thats my favorte food..(berlari mengambil ngiler azwraith)


    Beastmaster : maknyuus gk bro??


    Silencer : makny..*HUEEKKK,..APAAN INI??BAU BGT..


    Beastmaster : wahahaha..woi ****..percuma lu hero int,**** bgt lu..ngiler pun lu minum..hahaha..


    Azwraith : (tersadar dr melamun)hey bro,what yg terjadi with silencer??


    Beastmaster : hahaha..oi bro ngiler lu laku juga y..haha..silencer muntah2 berkat ngiler sakti mandraguna lu..hahaha..


    Silencer : Silence please..huekk..huekk..


    Azwraith n beastmaster : HAHAHAHAHAHA..CER..CER..


    Azwraith n beastmaster tertawa ampe jatuh bgn..
    BGM : JATUH BGN....
    Silencer yg murka melmpar glaiveny trs mnrs..


    Azwraith n beastmaster: ampun bro,ckt..awh..awh..


    Ktka azwrth n BM dsrg slncr, pasukan O.Z Menyerang,


    Azwraith CS: TUOLUONG2..ARGH..DONT KILL ME..owh iya kan ada gundam...


    Bersambung

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    wkwkwk.. story yang petama namanya kacau banget. wakakak

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    Beuh, kacau...

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    Chapter VI
    O.z invasion


    Crita sblumnYa:
    Azwraith cs terdampar di sbuah hangar yg menyimpan 5 gundam keren..ktika azwraith cs sdg ngerumpi,o.z menyerang..

    Azwraith : mama,save me..o.m.g

    Beast n silencer : shut up plz...kami ge mikir gmana cra kabur dr sene,u ganggu konsentrasi ja.!

    AzwraitH : argh2..

    Ditengah kpanikan azwraith cs,tb2 terdengar suara manusia.
    .
    Heero yuy : tman2,oz is coming,lets rock!!

    Azwraith cs : kyaaaa!!ad akang heero..kyaa...

    Heero yuy : zzz...

    Duo maxwell : hey heero,ada yg ngefans ama loe toh

    Raberba winner : thats right

    Chang wufei : bener tuh

    Trowa barton : itu benar

    Heero yuy : diem klen,ato gw ban gundam kelen!!

    Wufei dkk : .....

    Azwraith cs : so cool..

    Kmudian,heero dkk menaiki gundam mrka msg2,dan pertempuran dmulai..

    Heavyarm dkk : dor!dor!dor!crot2!

    Dalam skejap sekompi robot2 kroco o.z di hajar 5 gundam tsb..
    Tiba2,ada pesawat o.z melintas,heero yg mlhat psawat tsb lsg menerjang!!

    Heero yuy : o.z!!go to hell!!crettttt...
    Pedang laser gundam wing membelah badan psawat tsb mnjadi 2..

    Azwraith cs : wah..keren buanget,kyak di tipi2 tu lho..woah..

    Kmudian azwraith melhat ada 3 boots of travel dlante..

    Azwraith : pren,ad spatu terbang neh..kt mw kmana ge y?

    To be continued-


    N.b : tman2 yg ln slakan request mw dcmpur dgn anime ap..

    Sori klo penulisan crta nya tdk rapi,maklum..ngetik pke hp..hehe

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    k bleach....

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    gila.. ini crita..
    tapi nice story om.. kebanyakan bcandany.. sekali2 yang seger2 keq gini bole juga..
    bawa suasana baru di CC yang suram ini.. T___T

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