Untung saya chocolita cewe apa cowo
Btw, mana lagi ne puisi nya ....
Untung saya chocolita cewe apa cowo
Btw, mana lagi ne puisi nya ....
@Scripture.id
chocol, puisinya bole dicomot ga? mau taro di desktop... hehehe
bole ya...![]()
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ehem, coment2 boleh tapi jangan jadi chat dunk.. guah dah sediain klo mo ngejunk di obrolan bebas.. yang lain2 nda isa lagih. oks.
Btw gak ada puisi yg nda kudu buka kamus apah --a tapi gaya visualnyah oke juga, baru ada 1 yg kek gituh perasaan di IDGS![]()
I'm totaly *******
aLL, sry 4 late repP...
I had a problem with my internet connection for couple of weeks..> <
hmm..
maybe inged...XP~
nick YMna sapa ia? maav pelupa..> <
ni puisi bwt sum1 I love..
tp gk smuwa bagian dr puisi ini bener...
almost all, but he doesn't give his love for me yet...
doain ia...> <
waduh..
makanan?
jangan dimakan lho...@_@
lho..
saia sedang ngalamin ene..XP
widi..
jgn galak"..
bwakakak..XP
weww...
gk usa di warn gpp kok kk..^^
asal gk diulang ae..@_@
thx pujianx...
doakan saia biar bisa terus berpuisi..
wakwakkwa...
waduh..
yaapa lek tak batalno ae msk'e..
masa separah itu STTS..--"
wekz...
sudah sekian banyak org yg rePp topic ini masi gk taw saia cowo ato cewe?
cek FSku dhe..
sapa tau saia hode..
wakwakkwa...
[email protected]
add ia..
waduh..
ditunggu ia?
ada seh bbrp puisi lama..
bis gni qu mskin dhe..^^
I'd be glad to ^^
But pajang nama saia ia..
-Originally Made By: NyDd "ChocoLolita" -
waduu...
maav lho kk klo bikin buka kamus...
i want 2 improve my english..
sebisa mungkin puisi" di bahasa inggris...
@_@
dlu pernah disuru translate ke bhs indo bwad tugas B'I tapi jadina malah aneh..@_@
yawdah di inggris aja..XP
gaya visual?
meaning? > <
arghhH!!! knapa smuwa mengingadhkan pada laguuu!!!!!!!!!!
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR......
tak hapus ae kabeh lek ternyata dh ada di lagu org..
T_______________T
-L.O.V.E-
We always refuse love…
When we think that we didn’t need it..
We always think that love is valueless..
With our immature mind…
We always blame love..
When we feel that it started to hurt us...
But…
When that love is starting to go…
And leave us behind…
We always want it back..
And we always hoping that it will be back for us...
And when that love decides to give us another chance…
We don’t even respect it..
We always do the same thing…
Neglecting love..
If only that love has a chance to show what it feels...
Maybe it will always cry for us…
Maybe it will say that it don’t want to give us another chance ever again…
Maybe it will say its wishes to be human like us..
To get those who called “justice”…
Love is always comes unexpectedly…
It comes with every beautiful hopes that surrounds us...
And gone…
Leaving its very painful scars in our heart..
But, do we ever think about what make that love gone?
It’s gone because of our own fault…
It’s gone because we're the one who neglected it...
Didn’t want to accept it just the way it is..
Didn’t want to spend our time with it..
Didn’t want to take care of it..
Respect love…
Cz it always gives us another chance…
Always try to cheer us up..
And always try to keep its loyalty for us...
After millions curses had been said to it..
Last edited by ChocoLolita; 29-12-08 at 11:14. Reason: kesalahan grammar..XP
-Thank You-
Thank You God..
For family that always take care of me..
And for love that they’d given to me in every second…
Thank You…
For friends that always here for me…
And for every support that they’d given to me..
Thank You…
For the time that You’d given to me…
And for every wonderful second of my life…
Thank You…
For every single air that I breathe…
And every single care that You’d given to me…
Thank You…
For me and my life…
And for every “light” and “dark” side of me…
Thank You for the imperfect life of me..
Cz from this imperfect life…
I could learn to become stronger and stronger…
Last edited by ChocoLolita; 29-12-08 at 11:17. Reason: Grammar mistake...again..T_______T
guys..
bis gni qu mo nerbitin novel..
doain ia biar lancar..
Judulna prisoner..
novelna terdiri dari 2 buku (2 versi)..
Princess of Angel; Seraphine's Version & Prince of Devil; Rhafern's Version..
baca yg versi angel dlu ia..^^
novel ini dh ada critana di otakkuw sejak klas 1 dlu..
tp gk kutulis gtu..
klas 2 qu bikin gambar animasinya..
wah..mulai minat mao nulis neh..
klas 3 ini bru qu tulis...
emang seh novel ini berbau fantasi...
tp aQ sengaja nggambarin DEVIL n ANGEL bukan tanpa maksud..
mungkin terkesan kekanak"an ia...
tp i hope kalian bersedia beli novel ini...> <
i hope u guys like it of course..@_@
n i hope u guys can find the "hidden meaning" yg aQ taruh di novel itu..^^
btw, aQ mo nanya neh..
kira" ada gk penerbit terbitin buku klo aQ ndiri yg mao jadi ilustrator coverna?
> <
soalna aQ dh ada gambaran coverna n menurutku ini yg plg cocok..@_@
bagi yg gk suka yg terlalu terkesan fantasi, gomen nee...
laen x aq bikin yg gk fantasi dhe..XP
anyway, ini light novel, jd bagi yg gk suka baca novel yg tebel", mungkin novel ini enak dibaca..
tp klo yg suka tebel", gomen nee..> <
dah, pokokna minta doana ia all..> <
didoain...
wew setelah di cek fsnya ternyata...
hahaha...
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bagus2 puisinya..
smoga jd penulis besar...
huahaha...
bukan hode tapi
hahaha... nevermind...
waw... mana2.. klo bukunya menarik gw bli deh...
cepet2 diterbitin aje...
sapa tw bisa kaya JK Rowling... huahaha...
$_$
thx bwt puisi yg diatas.. bagus2 thu (klo bisa diterbitin jg dalam 1 buku...)
hahaha...
gw add ya fsnya ntar...
apa tuh?
@_@
ok~
add + comment lhow..XD~
targetkuw kek narnia...
CS.LEwis..
khan fantasi tuh..@_@
mawna c gtu...
diterbitin dlm 1 buku..
tar aja klo dh banyak puisinya..XD~
doain iaa..^^
•• Anata no Urami, Harashimasu ••
td pg prasaan ga restricted d... hueheu...
mao gmn kasi komen... di accept dlo ya...
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ada deh...
gw yakin banget...
saat gw sedih soal cinta kek nya gw harus baca ini berulang-ulang agar bisa lebih tenang...
ahahahahahahahaha....
so Nice..
gw sich ada dikit kata2...
-U Can't Touch a Love, But Love Can Touch Your Heart-
@Nydia...
btw lu tau lagu Mousukoshi yg nyanyi Saori Atsumi from OST Midori No Hibi??
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