Kompetisi Hero Maker

[SrZ]Xevirath]

Section pake model Queen of Pain ko --"

[valkemiere]

Aq br slesai jurus 1.minta waktu y. Aq jg pke maeiv. Cm ku edit.

[sariayu]

Gw mau ikut minder, ahahahahahah

[l0git3c]

Section pake model Queen of Pain ko --"

Kan warnanya beda... Wakaka

Eh ga ada yg review hero gw ni? Butuh feedback supaya di update neh T_T

[SrZ]Xevirath]

Oiya... maap lupa waktu itu mau DL tau2 hujanbadaipetirdatang lalu langsung matiin kom & modem D:

Spoiler untuk ralatan :

Slawunga
Soul Witch Sorcerer/Warlock/Magician/Whatever

Attribute
Strength: 15 + 2.0
Agility: 15 + 2.0
Intelligence: 25 + 2.5

Attack Range: 500
Movement Speed: 290

Story
Have the ability to control souls from many elements makes made him become a very powerful witch Sorcerer/Warlock/Magician/whatever (Witch = Female -___-). Slawunga determined to keep all souls that he controls save held captive every single souls he captured. But one day, a massacre from Scourge destroy many souls just to make them stronger The Scourge invaded Slawunga's <whatever>. This, massacre makes creates Slawunga want to revenge of his souls, and protect his remaining souls vengeance within Slawunga.


Ability
1. Soul Blast [R]
Throws a powerful soul an explosive spirit to the targeted point. Deals 100/150/200/250 damage to nearby enemies when the soul explode on explosion.

2. Ice Soul [F]
Enchant his body with the power of ice for 15 seconds. Increase his defense by 5/7/9/11. and Decreases Soul Blast's damage by half, but it will slow nearby enemies for by 25/30/35/40% when explode on explosion.
This skill ability/spell(?) will remove Flame Soul buff

3. Flame Soul [G]
Enchant his body with the power of fire for 15 seconds. Increases his base damage by 10/18/24/32% and increase Soul Blast's damage by half.
This skill ability/spell(?) will remove Ice Soul buff

4. Forbidden Soul [T]
Enchant his body with the might of the forbidden soul(s ?) for 25 seconds. Increases his Intelligence by 25/40/55%, and adds Soul Blast effect to hex nearby enemies [when explode on explosion for by 3/3.5/4 seconds.

Screenshot


Download

Nih dari saya... beberapa komentar >_>
1. Liat Quote-an saya, ada beberapa perbaikan kalimat @_@ (Grammarku busuk, tapi seenggaknya ngga ada salah arti sekarang.. xD) tapi kykna ngga usah, toh yang dinilai artinya, bukan kekerenan bahasa +_+
2. Nama heronya keren. @_@
3. Yang Ice sama Fire menurutku disatuin trus bikin skill 1 lagi, soalnya ngga keren banget kan kalo... dua skill malah saling kontradiksi @_@, dan lagi skill2nya secara individual kurang kuat D:
4. Menurutku Soul Blastnya bagusnya dicepetin cd nya dan damagenya ditambah dikit (120/180/240/300, soalnya lumayan susah makenya [ya enggak juga sih, tapi ya agak susah], dan kalo casternya mati pas missile udah fired, kemungkinan besar jadi worthless banget D: )
5. Ultinya keren, bisa ngebikin jadi dps @_@ tapi hexnya menurutku ubah jadi 2/3/4, biar lebih kerasa gunanya ngelevel up (tapi parah bener ya, klo pas ultinya aktif bia AoE hex tiap beberapa detik... -__- 1/1.8/2.6 deh klo mnurutku)
6. Menurutku sih udah keren, cuma Soul Blast mungkin ubah modelnya @_@ nggak keren banget klo "Soul" bentuknya "Meteor"

[valkemiere]

aneh aq ga bisa liat map xeviarth sm km thanatos, 1.22 sm 1.24 ga isa

[SrZ]Xevirath]

Eh, bukan, itu Slawunga punyanya logitec -_-

Aku... yang SrZ]Xevirath itu, sama orangnya -__- cuma klo di forum laen pakenya SrZ]Xevirath, jadi ya gitu -__-

Mapnya, coba diopen pake vJass/World Editor, kyknya agak ngaco ... tadi juga ngga isa buka dari Wc3
nanti mungkin diupdate klo udah difix :'(

[valkemiere]

aq ga ada we jass. nah it pantes aq buka ga bisa"

[SrZ]Xevirath]

di sini pake WE biasa bisa loh -__-

abis DL, pindahin ke Folder apapun, open pake WE, trus langsung test (harusnya bisa)
jangan liat2 script dulu kyknya, soalnya klo liat2 script dulu harus save ulang pas test map nya (klo ngga sala), tapi karena ngga ada vJass jadi ngga isa save ulang

[valkemiere]

Aq ga buka we. Aq buka gamenya lgsg. Aq truh di folder maps. D 1.22 ga bs play. 1.24 nm mapnya mlh ga ada

[SrZ]Xevirath]

oh iya emang gitu

ngga ngerti sih kenapa, tapi gitu -__-;

nanti aku update klo ketemu biang masalahnya

[valkemiere]

Aq dah bsa liat heronya. Tnyt hrs d play dri we @.@

[sariayu]

Udah tanggal 30 ya?

[ranzi]

aneh aq ga bisa liat map xeviarth sm km thanatos, 1.22 sm 1.24 ga isa

itu gara2 kepanjangan folder/nama_file, klo gag pendekin nama mapnya, bisa juga mapnya ditaruh di "C:\Program Files\Warcraft III\Maps\" jangan di "C:\Program Files\Warcraft III\Maps\Frozen Throne\Scenario\" atau yang lebih panjang lagi, jelas2 aja gag kebaca

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@thanatos

Thx... Itu idenya... ya muncul begitu saja... owkkowkokow...

Itu yang punya logit3c gw juga rada aneh...
1. Witch bukannya buat wanita yach?
2. Banyak kalimat yang rada ga klop gitu deh...

Yah gw mah ikut dengan koreksinya Thanatos... u punya grammar yang sangat bagus.