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    Post disappointment to you my heart

    kasih, tahukah kamu akan cintaku
    ku disini selalu merindu, selalu menanti
    apakah kau tau betapa resah hatiku tanpa kau disampingku
    kasih, hanya kau yg dapat memberi cinta kepadaku
    hanya kau yg dapat mencuri hatiku dan melukai jiwaku
    kasih, apakah kau tau bahwa ku sangat mencintaimu dan mengasihimu
    bagiku cintamu adalah hidupku

    greeting word makes the heart hurt
    one option pointed disappointment
    a decision to think logically
    resulted in the destruction of volatile matter
    I wish I could, if only I could
    if only I get say
    I will hug you tight for the last time
    but unfortunately, I was unable to see directly that all
    and I can only say "sorry, excuse me,
    i cannot love u forever, im sorry.
    bye-bye, no more words that permeated thought
    but disappointment because could not provide an option
    would-be brought up from the bed helpless

    seucap kata beriring nada
    seiris luka pasti membuat orang terluka
    ucapku jujur, seribu kata tak berbahasa
    ku disini ingin membuatmu tuk percaya
    ingin meyakinkan bahwa ku bener-bener sayang dan cinta kamu
    tapi sayang
    luka itu membuatku lemah tak berdaya
    ucap kata dari bibirmu seakan panah menusuk di jantungku
    berhentikan denyut nadi di tanganku
    bila jujur tuk percaya apapun bisa bermakna
    tapi ku percaya kalau jujur tidak selalu dianggap jujur

    perhaps what is always
    others are saying about you
    I believe this is the first time
    after I get the right evidence
    but I want you to know
    I've never been disappointed
    what we have been we run two
    what we often go through a second
    what we use to feel
    I will remember everything
    I remember all of it will always
    It has become fond memories that have never traveled
    because you have made today my day so full of color
    The last word for you
    I love you forever
    but I do not want you to remember
    here is our story

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    Jujur, gw jarang banget terharu kalo baca puisi, tapi baca yang ini gw bener" terharu. Mungkin karena kisahnya mirip dengan kisah gw, cuma ada satu perbedaan di line
    "I cannot love u forever, i'm sorry." Because as for me, it is like this "I love u forever, I do."
    Nice one, like this very much.

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    temen2 gwa yg liat pada bilang kalo puisi ini "alay" ,,tapi menurut gwa puisinya bner2 "ungkapan Hati"

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    Menurut gw, alay atau ngga tergantung dr penulisnya sendiri. Kalo di puisi cinta tulisan itu keluar dari hati, ya berarti bnr" tulus, tp kl emang niatnya ngegombal atau cuma mengarang, bisa aja jadinya alay.

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    makasi all.....
    jgn lupa ya thanksny^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tenshiteru View Post
    Menurut gw, alay atau ngga tergantung dr penulisnya sendiri. Kalo di puisi cinta tulisan itu keluar dari hati, ya berarti bnr" tulus, tp kl emang niatnya ngegombal atau cuma mengarang, bisa aja jadinya alay.
    Bener.. Tapi Mantab Lah Puisi2 Kk Prestige..

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