request, chapter 2 PANJANGIN !!
poles detail latar sama percakapan lebih imba lagi, event sequence nya bikin lebih banyak
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05-06-12, 18:39 #16
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The moment you say a word of parting, you've already parted.
So long as you and I are both somewhere in this world, we haven't parted.
So long as you don't say it, you haven't parted.
That is the way of the world:
The Law of Linkage.
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05-06-12, 18:42 #17
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smoga bisa
masih amatiran
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05-06-12, 19:19 #18
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aku ga mau ah suka ceritamu karna kamu...
namaya ga objektif...
mendingan suka sama kamunya langsung...
ayo lanjutin cia...!
semangat...
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wee si danil
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05-06-12, 19:22 #19
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makasih semangatnya .
ditunggu aja deh chapter 2nya .
chapter 1nya kan baru aja dipost .
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Wii, ada cerita baru
baca paragraf pertama, awalnya mikir ini puisi. Eh, taunya cerita.
Ngembangin cerita dalem paragrafnya keren bok, ngga banyak dialog tapi cerita bisa tersampaikan.
lanjutkan...mba?
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06-06-12, 22:58 #21
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ini truestory bukan cia?
ato dapet dari orang laen?
agak sedih liatnya
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07-06-12, 12:39 #22
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MEYONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
thanks menyon
akan dilanjutkan pastinyaa . kan baru bab 1
OHMENDIBILANGKEREN
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bukan true-story kok . ga dapet dari orang lain juga .
dapet dari otak yang lagi iseng . WEKEKEKE .
sedih yah ?
ngmg2 itu sapa! uda tau nama eke aja
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Kok jadi menyon?
okeh, lanjutkan! biar ada bahan bacaan selain ensiklopedi campuran dimari *ditampol*
woaowokakowkoakow
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karena mreka smua bilang panggil kamu menyon , alhasil .
kamu menyon
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