Defence of the ancient fanfiction: War of the ancient

[High elf ranger]

Author: Bagus surya, I also called
As THE FROST ARROW
Genre: Action, romance, mild violence



Synopsis:
Once the general archer from the silvermoon named Anasterian crystal arrow.
The last general ranger of the high elven kingdom, Quel’Thalas.
Some day his head troubled when he gets a report that his enemies the Scourge who have been defeated, rise again and reassembling their powers to revive they master Lich king.
Anasterian try to warned the alliance to aid the sentinels to purging the scourge from this world. But they ignore him, disappointed, he bring him self to the battle against the scourge. But unpredictable he meats with his love who have been lost for along time ago, thus exclaimed his final task is to destroying the scourge and rebuild his relationship with his love.










Character in the story


Main character;


1. Anasterian crystal arrow
Once he is the ranger general in his homeland Quel’thalas. After missing in action on his journey, he back to the Quel’thalas and learned that his beloved homeland has razed and many of his friends has been murdered. Anger by this state, he decide to aid the alliance to destroying the scourge in norhrend. They made it; the scourge has destroyed and kills their champion, Arthas. But after the month passed by, his mind and soul trembled and haunted by the scourge’s claws, in fear if the scourge back to terrorize this world. At last his concernment realized. The scourge has return and reassembling their power. He tried to warn the alliance but they ignored. With disappointment and the old hatred he brings his marksmanship into the battlefield to aid the sentinels and purging the scourge once and for all.



2. Alleria windrunner
The Sentinel's search for new recruits stretches beyond Azeroth, and in the broken pieces of Dreanor they found Alleria Windrunner, a superb High Elf ranger who, along with the other members of the Alliance Expedition, stopped the Orcs' invasion by closing the very portals connecting the two worlds from Dreanor's side, and have been roaming in this forsaken land ever since. The Sentinel brought back a sorrowful and vengeful ranger who learned that her former home which she sacrificed so much to defend has fall to the Scourge's invasion. The Windrunner is ready to fight alongside the Sentinel in order to hunt down Ner'Zhul the Lich king and his undead minions.











3. Sylvanas windrunner
Sylvanas windrunner is the Alleria windrunner’s sister. She formerly is the one of the ranger who protects her city silvermoon when the undead invasion landed on Quel’thalas. Unfortunate for her, she killed when try to protect the sunwell from the scourge’s corruption. But her soul is not rest in piece, she possessed her own dead body and after get he physical form, she manage to make an undead army to seek vengeance upon Arthas. Now Arthas has killed, but her insane actions are getting crazy. She even had a plan to make some plague that could made any living creature who contact with it will being an undead to expand her army and learned the forbidden knowledge, the Necromancy.
However her sister Alleria who heard about her sister’s fate, go to the undercity to resuscitate her sister and offering her the second chance to get her life again. But sylvanas refuse her sister offers recklessly and resist her. Alleria who don’t have any choice but manhandling her beloved sister and drag her to the well of eternity in kalimdor to purify her sister’s body and cleansed her soul.
Now Sylvanas realize her soul have been free from corrupted by vengeance have no choice but to aid the sentinels to destroying the scourge, as her payback to the sentinels who have gave her the second life and to redeem her sins.







Secondary character:


1. Furion stormrage
The leader of the Sentinels and all of the Night Elves, Furion tirelessly works to protect the sanctity of his woods. It comes as no surprise that he who helped defeat scourge would be called upon once more in the Sentinel's hour of need. The fury of nature is at his disposal, the trees come to life at his command, the wind carries him to lands far away, and nature itself strikes all who defy his will. He is more than just a Keeper or a Prophet, he is a savior.



2. Magina stormrage
Twin sons to the great Prophet Furion stormrage, Terrorblade and Magina were blessed with divine powers: Terrorblade granted with an unnatural affinity with life forces; Magina gifted with energy manipulation. Magina's eventual overexposure to the magics gradually augmented his elemental resistances and bestowed him the unique ability to move faster than light itself. Now, broken by Terrorblade's fall to the dark side, Magina answers the Sentinel's call in a desperate bid to redeem his brother. Every bitter strike turns the Scourge's evil essences upon themselves, culminating in a finale that forces his enemy to awaken to the void within and spontaneously implode.





3. Purist thunderwrath
A former member of the Order of the Silver Hand, Purist has joined the Sentinel to avenge the death of the Order's leader, Uther the Lightbringer. Trained by Uther himself in the ways of the Paladin, Purist brings the power of the Holy Light to the battlefield. He can purify the souls of allies, harming any nearby Scourge in the process. Able to protect allies from harmful unholy magic, the mere presence of a man of the Holy Light atrophies any nearby enemies. In times of dire need, Purist can call upon God himself to protect him and his allies


4. Lina inverse
A renowned elven mage roaming the lands, Lina Inverse originally joined the Sentinel to take revenge to the scourge that have destroying her homeland. However, weeks turned into months, and fighting alongside the many holy warriors with fearless souls inspired her with the responsibility of protecting the sanctity of the World Tree. With her devastating abilities to summon vaporizing flames, she wreaks havoc among the enemy ranks. In dire situations, she would imbue herself with an ultimate fervor, or even call forth a massive beam of lightning which is said to instantly slay any single foe. A most feared enemy of the Scourge, a most unswerving defender of the Sentinel.

5. Nortrom
Hailing from the magical community of Quel'Thalas, Nortrom is one of the strongest Elven warriors defending the integrity of the lands. Mastering the ancient art of glaive-throwing, and combining it with the volatile nature of the Blood Elves' arcane magic, he is able to disrupt the magical energies in his enemies. By binding his magical powers to his glaive, he is able to cause damage beyond devastation, gaining intelligence from every kill. Concentrating all his energies, he can cause chaos within his enemies' magical pools, making them unable to cast spells. He is determined to fend off the Scourge and their demon magic until he has breathed his last.



6. Chen
Prophesying a new dawn, a new world cleansed of the old evils, the Holy Knight's entrance into the war against the Scourge forever changed the course of history. Aiding the sentinels and adapted with a healing magic, and will stop at nothing to see the Scourge destroyed. If ever the redeeming hand of God touched earth, its name was Chen, the Holy Knight.



7. Davion
Abandoned and forsaken as a child, the Half-bred Dragon Davion sought refuge from the evils of the world, and from the uncontrollable power growing within him. His search led him to the doorstep of a mighty Druid Furion stromrage, who taught him to tap into the massive energies that lay concealed in his blood - a tribute to his ancient Draconian heritage. A master swordsman, Davion smites his foes in his raging frenzy - transforming at will into an Elder Dragon of destructive fiery rage to crush all the scourge, that threaten to vanquish his new home.














Antagonist character:


1. Kel’thuzad
Forcibly raised from the dead by the Lich King to serve as his elite magical guard, the Kel’thuzad has the burning cold of Northrend in his realm of control. Being the leader of the scourge and Evoking numerous freezing blasts, his talent in life still remains in death. Delving into the essence of cold magic, he has the power to cause ice to condense into an orb that bounces from foe to foe, causing tremendous pain in its wake. Sacrificing his allies for magical power, the Kel’thuzad is a murderer without a trace of warmth


2. Mortred
Born into the reclusive Night Elf order known as the Wardens but she shunned by mainstream Night Elf society, Mortred pledged allegiance to the Scourge to take revenge And betraying her kin. A perfect blend of strength and speed, the years spent alone in the forests of Ashenvale allowed her to blend into the terrain, appearing phantomlike at times and striking when you least expect it. The deadly precision with which she carries out her attacks has made her a valuable member of the Scourge even being them second in command, and it is clear why she is known as the Phantom Assassin.

3. Leoric
Once a noble knight protecting his kingdom, the man was thrown into Hell, where he was ripped apart over and over for centuries. Now, lich king has thrown him back into the soil, corrupted and mindless, as King Leoric, the Skeleton King. He marches on, leading his minions with an unfaltering gaze, knowing only one thing: the orders given to him by the lich king himself. Able to cripple his opponents by drawing power from the fiery depths of hell itself, King Leoric is a major threat on the battlefield. His mighty blade allows him and others in his presence to drain the blood of their enemies. It is said that he is unkillable, and those who are struck down by his hellfire don’t wake up again.

4. Anub’arak
Anub'arak was once the greatest champion of the Nerubians, but fell in the Second War of the Spider. He was resurrected by the Lich King Ner'zhul, who promised him eternal undeath in exchange for his unswerving loyalty. When threatened, he shoots these spikes through enemies, maiming and disorienting them. He channels his dark powers into a bolt of disarming negative energy, and those who witness him blending into the shadows of the frozen tundra have never lived to tell the tale.


5. Akasha
Akasha is one of the many souls claimed by the blade, Frostmourne. Raised to serve the Lich King as a Banshee, she desired to become pure substance once more. Driving deep into the forests, she was able to subdue and possess a Succubus minion. Rightly bearing the title, Queen of Pain, she enjoys nothing more than inflicting massive damage on her foes, using both the poisonous strikes of her succubus host and the vicious howls retained from her Banshee nature. Akasha breaks her enemies' eardrums with torturing screams, some so loud they manifest into powerful waves that ripple across the lands, shattering all in their wake.


6. Terrorblade stormrage
Terrorblade is the twin brother of the Magina Anti-Mage. Both of Night Elf descent, Terrorblade was drawn in by the powers of the Undead, plunging deeper into the abyss of no return, growing large, gargoyle-like wings to symbolize his breaking from the Night Elf world. Having mastered the art of image-creation and soul manipulation, he has the ability to transform into a fearsome and terrifying demonic form, obtaining the powers to hurl energy at his opponents. Large moon blades slashing, he is one to fear on the battlefield.

7, Strygwyr
An unusual hybrid of Demon and Orc, Strygwyr is an outcast amongst all mortal creatures. By thriving on and bathing himself with the blood of those he slays, Strygwyr can heal his wounds - even those that could prove fatal. Beware the fool who dares venturing alone, for Strygwyr can sense his blood miles away and gain vision through his helpless prey's eyes. Having ruptured the enemy with mighty blows in his bloodthirsty



Chapter 1
The Disappointments


The winter has come in Lordaeron, every side covered with snow and freezing air. Some stormy nights, the air was so cold blowing into the city garden, numbing anyone who dared to stand against it.
But it didn't mean anything for the man who had been there for three hours abstracting something that had been haunting his mind for years. He is Anasterian Crystalarrow, the strategic general of the Alliance.
Substantively, he shouldn’t have worried about anything like most generals in the Alliance command. Sure, the Scourge was destroyed in the Northrend, resembling with their champion, Arthas, three years ago, but to date there’s nothing to prove their further existence.
In spite of it, there is always something bothering his mind. One of the biggest questions that have not been answered yet: if the scourge was destroyed, why can’t we find the frozen throne? If they evacuated their master's throne, it would mean the Scourge still existed in this world, waiting for the right time to launch the counter attack against us. A thousand questions have his mind blowing in his head.

Anasterian was breathing deeply, letting the cold air filling his lungs. It was a really cold weather as it is used to be in the middle of winter, especially given that it was 12 o’clock at that moment. But the moonlight was still shining to accompany his lonely heart. In this his close friend Varressa came.

Surprised to see him there Varressa asked: Anasterian, you still here? You better go to bed, General. It’s midnight and the air is so cold out here.

Anasterian: Midnight? I guess I should be in my bed by now. But no thanks, fellow, I’ll stay here. Even if I went home, I couldn't sleep a wink. So I could as well stay here in fresh air... I’ve much to ponder about.

Varressa: It’s up to you, General, but mind that tomorrow morning we have a meeting with the leader of the Sentinels, Arch druid Malfurion Stormrage. Make sure not to be too late for it.

Then Varressa gave her beautiful smile to her comrade. She has already known the habitually of her dear friend and the “ritual” he always does when the moonlight revealed. Soon she walked out and left him alone with his daydream. Varressa is one of Windrunner’s youngest sisters who have married with Anasterian’s close friend, Rhonin about 7 years ago.

Anasterian insisted on staying there. Standing wistful just like a mad man, mumbling, thinking, worried over things the most people even do not think about.
The night became darker as time passed by, the cold wind blowing and beating against his body. But he stayed there, for some time at least. An hour or so later the ranger general felt the entire of his body shaking. Heading for home he was mumbling: The winter is getting mad… Varressa is right. I shall not challenge the snow storm or I will be back with some frostbite, huh… I need to get some sleep...

Once walking lazily to his lodge he noticed that the city of Dal’aran ally looked as deserted and terrifying as the result of this midnight and the terrible winter.
Arriving in his bed he closed his eyes trying to forget his problems at least for a while.


Next morning at the meeting hall, the entire of the alliance generals and leaders attended in this convention.
• Anasterian Crystalarrow as the Alliance strategic general and the general from the archers division.
• Magni bronzebeard, the leader of the dwarf armies and the king of Khaz modan kingdom.
• Rhonin redhair, the chief of Dal’aran wizards and the chairman of Dal’aran council.
• Dane ironforge, the Alliance general from the equipment and troops also being the second in command in Alliance leadership.
• King Terenas, the leader of Alliance itself and deliberate decision maker in every meeting.

Soon the leader of the Night elves, Malfurion Stormrage, took his place and the leader of human alliance spoke to him.

King Terenas: Greetings, Arch druid Furion Stormrage. You’ve travelled so far from the Kalimdor and we all sit here, ready to hear you and aid you as the member of the alliance.

Furion: Thanks, old friend. I bring terrible news and it may seem unbelievable. But I got the report from my trustworthy scout that the undead Scourge made their headquarters in the east Moonglade forest five miles away from the well of the eternity. They do not play games; they are reconstituting their powers and recruiting their generals from the entire of this world for the Lich King’s bidding. I am here to require your assistance, my old friends.

The audience became restless not quite believing that news. As far as they knew, the Scourge had been annihilated from this world in the war of the Frozen Throne. Thus many of the listeners started to complain saying this had to be a disinformation.

Magni bronzebeard: Terenas!! Explain to him. We, the human, are not going to get involved in the war against the Scourge … again. We are done with that! Too much blood has been shed; too many sacrifices have been made…. I am sorry; Furion, but I and my brethren will not entangle ourselves in your restless war!!!

Anasterian: King Terenas, the Night Elves is our ally. Their problems are ours.
If the undead reach the well of eternity, reviving their master, Lich King, will not be so unlikely anymore. Remember, they almost succeeded in the battle of the mount Hyjal. Shall they be given the opportunity to afflict the entire world with their undead plaque? No Magni, I will not agree with you!

Rhonin: Pardon me, my friend… but I share Magni’s conviction. This is not our war.
(Turning to King Terenas), Rhonin continued: We are tired of wars, King Terenas! I believe that not participating in the Sentinels’ wars is for the welfare of all.

Anasterian (muttering): Damn you, Rhonin!!!

Dane Ironforge: I also do not agree to the war, lads!!! I most certainly will not let my warriors getting killed and rot in the hand of the Scourge!!!

King Terenas, who also was not convinced of the news’ verity, explained calmly his decision to Furion:

King Terenas: I am sorry, Furion, but in consideration of the public interest I am afraid we cannot take part in this war against the Scourge. Having in mind the disadvantage we would face if engaged in battles against Scourge and considering the fact that they are out of our territory, I must confirm what has been said: I am very sorry, Furion, but you’re alone on you wars.

Anasterian, who felt King Terenas’ decision was unfair, didn’t hide his anger about it and stood up to oppose the council’s decision stating:

Anasterian: King Terenas!! This is most unjust! Aren’t we allies?! Aren’t we supposed to help each other? When, if not...

Feeling a gentle pat on his shoulder, Anasterian stopped. Turning to his right, he saw Furion, who now said appeasing:

Furion: enough…, enough, young general. Don’t waste your breath to convince them.
(To the audience he spoke): Thank you for your attention, gentlemen, I do understand that the Alliance doesn’t want to aid us….. But I hope the battle of mount Hyjal was not our last common union.

Finished talking Furion left the meeting hall and headed to his ship, preparing for the journey back to Kalimdor. Anasterian who was disappointed by his companions felt that it was his destiny to finish his task: purging the rest of the scourge out from this world. So he runs to chase Furion and talk to him...

Anasterian shouted: wait…, Shan’ do Stormrage! I‘ll go with you. Your problem with the Scourge is my concern as well, and I’ve unfinished business with Lich King. Please let me aid you as one of your generals.

Furion: ah…, general…..

Anasterian: Anasterian…, Anasterian Crystalarrow, the last high elf ranger from the capital city of Quel’Thalas, Silvermoon. Please just call me Anasterian.

Furion: All right, Anasterian then. It’s an honor if you want to fight alongside the Sentinels, young elf. But you better hurry for our ship will be on its way through the seas in less than an hour.

Anasterian: Got it. Wait for me at the shore. I just need to bring my trusted bow, several arrows and some stuff before. See you Shan’ do.

Anasterian run over his lodge. After packing and taking his bow on his back, he run back to the streets near the shore. He met Varressa and her husband Rhonin, who were surprised to see him hastening his run and carrying his stuff.
Wondering about that Varressa asked: Where are you going, Anasterian?

Anasterian replied: I am heading to Kalimdor, Varressa, To aid the Sentinels in the war against the Scourge…. And please, do not try to stop me, my companion...

Varressa: I did not want to stop you, friend. But you would not go without saying good bye to your close friends, would you?

Rhonin: Are you still upset because I did not support you in our last meeting?

Anasterian: I was then, but am not anymore. Actually I can understand…, you as a human will never feel the same way about solidarity and confraternity. Well then you have to protect your city Dal’aran. Get on with it, mates.

Then Anasterian shared his hug with his mates Rhonin and Varressa, saying: Stay close to your beloved husband, Varressa, and don’t worry. I shall mail you from Kalimdor, I promise. Rhonin, take good care of your wife.

Varressa: I will.., but the alliance shall regret losing their best strategist.

Anasterian: Well, that was their fault!..Okay I’ve got to go.

Rhonin: Good bye, my friend. May your journey be successful.

Anasterian just smiled and then run over the shores, where Furion has been waiting for him.

Furion: well..., Anasterian you coming.

Anasterian: course I am…

Furion: right! Let’s embark; we have a long journey, young elf.

[High elf ranger]

okay cerita udah gua pindahin ke sini
segitu dulu yah... chapter berikutnya nyusul setelah ada feedback

[M~]

first comment ahh..


MANTAP gan..
ditunggu chapter 2 nya..

[High elf ranger]

^ pertamaxxx

update berapa hari sekali nih?
3 hari 2 hari 1 minggu? wkwkw

[M~]

^ pertamaxxx

update berapa hari sekali nih?
3 hari 2 hari 1 minggu? wkwkw

terserah lu bro
yg pntg kalo bsa scepatnya sihh
hehehe

[High elf ranger]

okay dah, ini gua post chapter 2
bonus!!!

btw gua ubah character pake nama sylvanas buat gantiin traxex, agar ceritanya lebih "sense"


Chapter 2
The sentinels

The time was showed at 03.29 evening when they arrived at kalimdor, after long journey across the seas. Anasterian steps his foot on the Kalimdor’s ground and looks around; Dislike Lordaeron, the weather and the air in kalimdor are bit different, Anasterian felt the air was so fresh from green forest that always dominated the landscape, such as the beauty and tranquil place.
They both march toward the sentinels’ base and Anasterian starts the conversation with Furion.

Anasterian: hey Furion. Is the sentinel’s base still far away? By the way this place doesn’t change from the first time that I’ve came first, and there is no sign of the scourge around here.

Furion: that’s because they made they headquarters 5 miles away from here. But still the entire of this forest isn’t whole anymore. Still, blight and plague from the scourge still haunting our tranquility soil. I even don’t believe, after the invasion of the Burning legion 5 years ago it still consumes our lands.

Anasterian: that’s why I am standing here, to purging the rest of the scourge from this world. And make their master, Lich king responsible for his sins

Furion: you rather look like a ranger who has seeking a vengeance instead….

Anasterian: umm… something likes that…

Furion: yeah... I could understood, the scourge has made so many people in this world going suffer and sorrow. But watch it, young high elf, the revenge shall blind and consume you if you over obsessed for it.
Oh the sentinel’s base is ahead.

They arrived at the sentinels base. The place is very beautiful, the fresh green grass as the flour, the butterfly hanging around, and the building using the power of nature standing sturdily. After Furion take some break, he makes announcement to introduce the new warrior who will aid the Sentinels against the scourge.

Furion: Attention my all of my warriors!!! We have a new hero to aid us destroying the scourge. He was once a General-Ranger in Silvermoon. Anasterian, introduce your self!

Anasterian: umm…, hello every body. My name is Anasterian crystal arrow. I was the High elf from Quel’Thalas and I am here to help you do vanquishing the scourge, hope we could be work together….

Nortrom: The High elf from Quel’Thalas? Are you kidding me? The rest of the High elf survivor are faded and change their names into the Blood elves. So its totally crap if you claiming your self as a High elf!!

Anasterian: Hey!!! Watch your clever mouth Blood elf!!! I still holding my culture as the High elf!! I am not being like your pathetic kin who have been thirsty on magic!! Watch that difference between us!!!

Nortrom: How dare you insulting me. Ranger!! Are you seeking a fight against me??!! You shall regret!!!

Anasterian: You’re welcome to try …, Blood elf!!!

Anger by Anasterian’s statement, Nortrom sprung forth; try to attack him with his glaive and Anasterian standing calmly to counter his every attack in further

Nortrom: you shall pay your insult with your blood!!!! Taste my glaive!! Ranger!!!

Anasterian: You’re too slow blood elf…..

Anasterian soon easily evaded the incoming strike against him, and suddenly took his arrow from his quiver, imbuing it with a magic power and pull his bow string to shot the arrow

Anasterian: now is my turn….

Anasterian aim his arrow’s head about 30 centimeters away from Nortrom’s body and unleash the powerful shot, so powerful, even destroying anything on that arrow’s path and made Nortrom’s body thrown about ten meters away from its path, Creating the thick cloud of dust as the rest of the battle. Anasterian walk toward him took another arrow from his quiver and once again fill on his bow, then he talking:

Anasterian: Do not say anything about my race or….

Nortrom: Or what? You can’t avoid the fate that we all the highborn elves are drift far from our ancient culture!!! Not even you!!!

Anasterian: You… better shut up and stop telling about my fate as the High elf, Blood elf!!! Before my second arrow bring you to your unconscious!!

As Anasterian walk closer toward Nortrom to confirm his words as the manner to don’t judge about his race, Furion swiftly hold him and speak loudly.

Furion: Enough!!! Both of you!!! Stop this pathetic combat!! We’ve same reason to be here!! Not to make a hatred and vengeance between us!! You better save your anger for the scourge gentleman!!

With the loud voice from their leader Furion, the audience begins to leaving that place and disperse them self in quite. Then he transfers his gaze at Anasterian and Nortrom.

Furion: what’s going on with you gentleman? Nortrom, since when the fate of the high elves being your concern? And you Anasterian try to control your emotional we here work as a team and each member of the team should has tolerance to each other!

Anasterian took back his bow as the commandments of Furion. He breathing deep to keep a temper and calming himself. Meanwhile Nortrom felt that he was enabling to rise up due the power of the shot weakening him. Knowing this situation Furion continuing:


Furion: Lina!! Help Nortrom to stand! And bring him back to his lodge, Anasterian! You go with me. I will show all thing on this base.

Anasterian: (nodded)

Meanwhile on the lodge’s living room the hooded beauty elf named Alleria Windrunner just finished her lunch, she’s not going outside, so she was don’t know and don’t manage to know what’s happening there. Then, another female elf coming and hastened her steps, try to tell something important to Alleria…

Lina: Alleria…! Alleria…! Did you hear the announcement? Furion back from his journey and bringing the new hero. He’s the High elf Ranger, he also the archer just like you..
Alleria: A High elf? So rare the male elf being an archer….

Lina: I don’t wonder about that, he take down Nortrom with a single powerful shot, like your powershot! And he’s handsome guy…

Alleria: The Ranger with a powerful shot?

Alleria try to remembering her child hood. As she remember she had a boy friend when she still in Quel’Thalas and the boy is only one who holding a bow among the high elven men folks who just interest in arcane magic. But the boy that he remembered has been killed when the orcs slaughtering her family 32 years ago.
Then her mind shocked when Lina describe the Ranger and even more when Lina mentioned his names..

Alleria: Impossible!!! Anasterian Crystalarrow is my child hood friend in Quel’Thalas, which he has been deceased 32 years ago!!!!

Lina: what!! Died ?

Anasterian: I’ve reported as killed in action?!!

The figure of someone has come, the male elf wearing the grey cloak and holding a golden bow appeared, it was Anasterian, standing there with a smile decorate his face
He have already heard their conversation above and then approach them, and Alleria stared at him, try to recognize her love that had been lost in long times before and she really sure that he is.
Anasterian walk towards Alleria who had stunned, and soon Alleria swiftly embracing her love so tight likes she will never let him go, and the happiness tears could seen on her cheek

Alleria: Anasterian!!!…. I though that I’ve lost you 30 years ago…

Anasterian: Its okay…, its okay, my love… now I am here…, dear. Now will you release me? Please and let me explain, okay

Alleria: Oh, sorry…

Anasterian: when the Fel orcs try to breech the Silvermoon, I was on duty to defend our city by redirect them out to the forest. But I miscalculate. They are too many. So I get the lethal wound and dying alone in the forest, instead. Many of my brethrens though that I’ve died and abandon me in Eversong forest. But the fate has changed. Some kindness Elf helps me and takes care of my wounds for six months instead.
And when I’ve back to the Silvermoon, you and some comrades had gone
To hunt down that orcs, indeed I try to looking for you over this world…but after many years you never detectable. Despondent, I’ve back to Silvermoon and find there are full of sorrow and terrible plague…
But let bygones to bygones. And let it’s the last thing that we’ve paid to the scourge.

Alleria: Ah…, Anasterian, I am so happy to see you again, bless the stars. I know we shall together again….

Anasterian: hey…, isn’t oblivious I heard the news that you’re not deicide your self back to Quel’Thalas because you’re missing in Draenor and married with your comrade Turyaron. Right?

Alleria: what!! Me and Turyaron? I am not, he and another comrades are lost and separate in Draenor when we hunting down the Orcs warchief. And ferry luckily, the Sentinels found me and make my way out.
Damn…, It’s must be the one of the Dal’aran who has release that news. And the whole world believes that?

Anasterian: Even your sister, Varressa also believed that news. How would us to know. The Dal’aran is the trusted source that we had.


Alleria: Humph…, why these worlds so cruel due trust the fake news???

Anasterian: I’ve no wonder about that. (Whispering at Alleria) I’ve heard from Furion that your sister Sylvanas also here? Right?

Alleria: yup!! You got the right…, well, one year ago, I’ve found her in her “city” going mad and talking nonsense. Yeah, you know after Arthas killed she’s pretty dizzy and becoming more crazy than the sister that I ever known before, so I manage to make her in helplessness and drag her down to the well of eternity. To regain her life and make her pick up her threads once again, in the goodness of course. But her---

Sylvanas: My blue paled skin and my crimson eyes still take a place, indeed. At the first time I’ve to guise my name as Traxex for a while, to make sure people don’t recognize me as the ruler of the Forsaken.

Anasterian: whoa... whoa. That’s no wonder the presence of the Forsaken have vanquished over Larderon since 1 year ago. Looks like their queen have realized her sins and back to the honest and goodness.

As Anasterian rabbit on her, Sylvanas felt her old friend is over tease her. Soon she chokes his neck by her forearm, to gave her mate some manner about harassing people…

Sylvanas: I hate talking much about my past!!! Anasterian!!! Please... it’s hurt. You know.

Anasterian: (still choked) Okay… okay mates. It’s shall be done, now will you release me? Please, I choked… Ouch

Soon, Sylvanas release him and swiftly embracing him tightly…., due she’s also very miss her close mates who had long time never seen

Sylvanas: Anasterian…!!!! My mate I was so miss you…, long years has not change you bit.

Anasterian: Ahhh, I very happy to know that so many people miss me during my absence

Alleria: eh.. I was forgetting something, Anasterian… This is our friend, Lina introduce your self.

Lina: ah Alleria… I thought you will never say…, hi I ‘am Lina inverse. The fire mage from Quel’Thalas. Nice to meet you. Anasterian crystal arrow.

Sylvanas: watch it, Anasterian. She is a fire mage. She will burn you up if you mess with her….

They are laughing; Anasterian got the unpredictable reunion with his mates, His close mates even since he is still a little young elf.
His mind remembering his childhood with them; playing and running in Eversong forest, the moment when Alleria teaching him how to shot with bow and arrow at the first time, and remembering when he and Alleria chasing the boys who tried to harassing Sylvanas and Varressa to gave them a manner. Yeah at the moment that such as a simple and peace life.
His day dream interrupted when Furion knocked the door and come to join with them for a serious talk.

Furion: Ishnu’alah*, general ranger Anasterian.

Anasterian: Ishnu’alah dal dieb*, Furion stromrage, Anaria shola*.

Furion: shorel aran*. Tomorrow I need you and Alleria to scout the scourge settlement, to watch they step and plan in this war. Careful both of you. Their general may be patrol through all their territory, so it’s a simple mission but it’s full of perils and danger. Well I suggest you to get a rest during this nigh.

So they both spending the rest of the night by take a rest (in the different room of course)
Anasterian’s heart full in happiness that he could be together again with his mates and especially with his love Alleria. So he sure that he not make a mistake decision to stay in this place and no being regret to do that.
Now he considers that his task just only one: vanquishing the scourge out from this world

[High elf ranger]

oy om lunarcrusade!! ceritanya udah post nih, wait your coment!!

[M~]

oy om lunarcrusade!! ceritanya udah post nih, wait your coment!!

sippp dehh,,
oke2
ntar malam baru baca
skrg mau OL dota dlu
wakwkakawkwak

[High elf ranger]

w main sama ai dolo ah

[LunarCrusade]

oy om lunarcrusade!! ceritanya udah post nih, wait your coment!!

sabar bos tadi nonton anime dolok gw, paling lambat besok dah komen nya, ini masi ada donlotan ngantri sebiji

[High elf ranger]

di Playdota sepi, sini juga....

[LunarCrusade]

Cepet aja dah:

• Sebenernya ngenalin semua karakter dari awal itu ga perlu. Akan lebih seru kalo ga ketauan dari awal, dan di-reveal seiring cerita berjalan.
• Format dialog kamu lebih ke arah format drama daripada cerita...
• Bbrp sih memang ga sesuai sama history nya Azeroth, but well...this is just fanfic, right?
• Little mistake,
  

  Dislike Lordaeron, the weather and the air in kalimdor are bit different,

  Harusnya unlike.

[High elf ranger]

hehehe
dislike,, oh ya!! unlike (berbeda)

namanya story pertama om.
banyak juga sih ane liat orang pake format ini, lebih mudah di mengerti keknya

kok gabisa edit post yah?

[M~]

hehehe
dislike,, oh ya!! unlike (berbeda)

namanya story pertama om.
banyak juga sih ane liat orang pake format ini, lebih mudah di mengerti keknya

kok gabisa edit post yah?

cerita gtu panjang dalam indonesia aja bisa salah,
apalgi dlm english broo
hahahah

bisa kok,,
edit post,,
trus save,,
gtu aja,,

[LunarCrusade]

hehehe
dislike,, oh ya!! unlike (berbeda)

namanya story pertama om.
banyak juga sih ane liat orang pake format ini, lebih mudah di mengerti keknya

kok gabisa edit post yah?

Untuk dialog memang jadi lebih gampang diikutin sih, harus gw akui demikian...
ya udah gapapa deh, toh ini bukan mau diterbitin kayak buku gitu kan?


Bisa kok edit, liat aja di pojok kanan post milik sendiri...ada opsi "Edit Post" - "Reply" - "Reply with Quote"
Pencet aja Edit Post nya (kalo ngadat, coba klik lagi)