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  1. 07-03-08, 03:04 #1
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    Default Hari yang Cerah

    Hari yang Cerah


    Hari cerahku,,
    selalu diisi keceriaanmu..
    Ku dampingi kau di setiap waktu...
    Menghapus rasa risau di hatiku..
    Ku kan selalu menjagamu...

    Biarpun terkadang hujan badai menerpa,, perasaanku tetap hanya untukmu...
    Berusaha memenuhi kebutuhan batinmu...
    Dan akhirnya pun berhenti....

    Kini pelangi nan- elok kian menghiasi...
    Hidup kita selalu bersama...
    Ada suka dan ada duka..

    Waktulah yang menentukan,, perpisahan kita...
    Kuharap,,, kau selalu terus bersamaku,, selamanya...

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  2. 09-03-08, 08:15 #2
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    ehemmm2.................... uhuk2 :dizzy:

    tuid2 buat sapa tuww :hilarious: ehhehe
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  3. 09-03-08, 15:13 #3
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    Kesendirianku

    Kelam surya mulai rengkuh hariku
    Jingga warnamu basuh kumal wajahku
    Siratkan kepedihan hariku dalam keheningan gelapmu
    Aku berdiri dalam istana sepiku
    mengais asa terajam derita
    Hingga kurasakan penat tikam jiwaku

    Kutatap mega hingga ujung mataku
    Kusibakkan kabut kebencian penghalang disekitar pandangku
    tuk dapat kusingkap indah ilusi khayal hari esokku
    dan lupakan kelamnya hari terangku
    Hingga kudapat resapi dan nikmati pahit manisnya gelap sepiku
    dalam kesendirianku
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  4. 10-03-08, 18:37 #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by SeA View Post
    ehemmm2.................... uhuk2 :dizzy:

    tuid2 buat sapa tuww :hilarious: ehhehe
    huehuehueh..

    ada dh buat spa aja yg mau..

    Buat lea mau?

    xD
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    Kesendirianku

    Kelam surya mulai rengkuh hariku
    Jingga warnamu basuh kumal wajahku
    Siratkan kepedihan hariku dalam keheningan gelapmu
    Aku berdiri dalam istana sepiku
    mengais asa terajam derita
    Hingga kurasakan penat tikam jiwaku

    Kutatap mega hingga ujung mataku
    Kusibakkan kabut kebencian penghalang disekitar pandangku
    tuk dapat kusingkap indah ilusi khayal hari esokku
    dan lupakan kelamnya hari terangku
    Hingga kudapat resapi dan nikmati pahit manisnya gelap sepiku
    dalam kesendirianku
    wihh puitis amat jon wkkwkwkw

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  5. 11-03-08, 18:10 #5
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    comment na dunk >.<

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  6. 12-03-08, 00:51 #6
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    Kerennnnnnnn....!! ^^V,

    Asli keren..hehehehe...

    Anwy,kl mw bikin "thread of the month" musti diginiin yah? Puisinya/kata2nya di pisah 1 thread 1 thread??

    Hmm...g kbykn thread tuh?

    Cb deh mampir ke thread gw...
    http://www.indogamers.com/f399/kumpulan_puisi2ku-64209/

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  7. 13-03-08, 20:51 #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by yagami_light View Post
    Kerennnnnnnn....!! ^^V,

    Asli keren..hehehehe...

    Anwy,kl mw bikin "thread of the month" musti diginiin yah? Puisinya/kata2nya di pisah 1 thread 1 thread??

    Hmm...g kbykn thread tuh?

    Cb deh mampir ke thread gw...
    http://www.indogamers.com/f399/kumpulan_puisi2ku-64209/

    Btw,bagi GRP dunk Ndruw...
    hahaha..

    thx yah atas pujian nya ^.^

    yg lain need comment na dunk

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  8. 14-03-08, 07:14 #8
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    keren sih, tapi kurang puitis .. hohoho
    PLay Hard Go Pro..
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  9. 15-03-08, 01:23 #9
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    hahaha..

    dicoba lagi untuk kedepan nya ^.^

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  10. 20-03-08, 09:43 #10
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    puisinya ringan dan mudah dimengeti maknanya..
    bagus menurut gw
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  11. 24-03-08, 20:42 #11
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    thx yah babakulima..

    more comment from others?

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  12. 27-03-08, 20:24 #12
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    naiz,, ending sdkit kurng gmn gitu..^^ IMO
    Destiny by sinner sought, Tragedy by power wrought.
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  13. 27-03-08, 20:54 #13
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    ahaha... tQ atas comment nya..
    tar wa coba buat yg lebih baik lagi ^^

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  14. 29-03-08, 12:36 #14
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    Coba dibuat lebih puitis, gunakan kata2 yang indah untuk puisi indah, perhatikan asonansi dan aliterasi..
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  15. 30-03-08, 09:41 #15
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    Minta contoh na dunk buat ambiguitas dan kata2 indah gitu..

    mau buat yg baru

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