Kecewa menghapus memori
Rasa sakit tak terasa
Bumi terpijak hampa
Guntur menggelegar menghancurkan angan
Panas bara menghanguskan rasa
Biarlah tangan yang bicara!!!
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26-03-08, 15:31 #1
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*******!!!
ID B-Net : Nightblade
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03-04-08, 15:21 #2
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cuaca di hati mu lagi ad badai nak?
panas banget dari stiap kata2nya
w0w
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04-04-08, 16:42 #3
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ini pasti cewe lo baru d rebut cowo laen wkwkwkwk ^^
Be The Best - Do The Best
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04-04-08, 19:13 #4
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keren juga.....
jarang2 orang buat puisi bertema gini.....
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04-04-08, 20:15 #5
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judulnya agak kurang asik bgt
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05-04-08, 01:42 #6
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tpi tangannya di kasi mulut...
baru bisa jelas berbicaranya
hoooaamm
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07-04-08, 22:50 #7
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hahahaha...
ekspresinya bagus sayangnya judulnya kurang bagus
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07-04-08, 23:29 #8
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Lain kali, dalam membuat puisi, jangan menggunakan bahasa yang kasar/sangat kasar
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08-04-08, 14:14 #9
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maknanya masih sangat simple. Coba dipanjangin
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09-04-08, 01:46 #10
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wew... makna kok terlalu simpel?
kalo makna itu ya apa adanya, mungkin ekspresi bahasanya yang ringan
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10-04-08, 12:12 #11
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wew yang gwe suka kata-kata terakhirnya
Originally Posted by Nightsand
Biarlah tangan yang berbicara ::gift::“ Being Nerazzurri is like riding a motorbike: adrenaline and desire to win everything. ” - Valentino Rossi
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19-04-08, 16:59 #12
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Keren jg puisinya,pendek,tp bnr2 bs ngungkapin perasaannya.
Cuma judulnya kok menurutku rasanya terlalu kasar ya..
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